All Comments on 'He Wanted Me to Watch'

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stringer60stringer60over 12 years ago
Awesome

What a great story - as brief and intense as their encounter!

I'm usually not a fan of first person fantasy stories but I am glad I read this one.

Where's the nearest parking lot? LOL

Thanks for making me horny for the rest of the day :)

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 12 years ago
Loved it!!

The erotic detail was exquisite! The author obviously loves to watch--and be watched. Well done.

ValensGirlValensGirlabout 12 years ago

This is gorgeous. In my mind I edited it to certain people I know, and it fit so well... :) Hot.

KittykittykatgirlKittykittykatgirlover 11 years ago
Awesome

Love it so hard to find girls that like to watch and tell it from their veiw. Love guys getting caught and watched too.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Great form. An easy read. It's good to find a good story written in the Second Person.

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