All Comments on 'Heart of the Wolf Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
so awesome!

great story

Stormwolf13Stormwolf13almost 10 years ago
Anxiously Awaiting

Ok, I am hooked. Cannot wait for the next chapter

Sid0604Sid0604almost 10 years ago
Thank you...

I'm thoroughly enjoying your story and looking forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

it's a great story but the chapters r too short.... can u hurray and write more....on edge. 😀

imensygalimensygalalmost 10 years ago
Got me hooked

Nice plot,great story,short chapters. Please make the chapters longer pretty please

geemeedeegeemeedeealmost 10 years ago

Interesting premise. One thing I don't get: if everyone could feel it both times when Catie was smacked across the face, why didn't everyone feel the pain of her rape, which was not only more painful physically, but mentally as well?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Chapters are too short for waiting that long in between them!

The header says it all. Write a longer chapter and post it more often, thanks.

ariesgirlariesgirlalmost 10 years ago

I hope Logan is tortured hard and for a long time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
I'm hooked

I'm hooked but I agree the wait between chapters is too long for then to be but a short page would really like to see 3 pages in a chapter at least or if just 1 page than at least post more often! But you are very talented and I'm very hooked thanks for the great read I'm excited to see what happens!

angelicbeautyangelicbeautyalmost 10 years ago

Aewsome....This is the best so far. I can't wait to read more. Please make it longer

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
You are great

This is a great story and I can't wait for you to continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
hurry:)

Loving it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
love it

if her wolf is white i may die from amazingness. ilove when some ones wolf isn't the color of their hair..please continue this book

kipolokipoloalmost 10 years ago
and I cried

wonderful writing... had me entranced throughout.. looking forward to more....

Phil_PatsfanPhil_Patsfanalmost 10 years ago
Great Story

Does this mean her wolf is awakening?

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 9 years ago
So good, wow!

I really like this story a lot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Ah?

8.7 miles...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Really hoped Logan would be the gay best friend, not some nefarious fuckwad. Wanting to throttle a fictitious character is no way to start a Tuesday.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
good story

There are a few syntax issues but I really like the concept. I'm so excited for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Love this!

Great job with this story! Love every bit of it

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