All Comments on 'Heart of the Wolf Ch. 08'

8 chapters and You haven´t got longer than that! Long wait every time makes me don´t want to finish reading this story. Sorry, chapters are relatively short and nothing much happens from one to the next. Hurry up or You will lose readers, as I don´t think I am the only one to have these complaints to make.

I do kinda agree with the previous comment. Your chapters are relatively short of content with a long wait between postings. I like the progression of the story and would like to see what happens with the couple & pack. I follow several writers on Lit, and they do take time between postings. However, they produce longer chapters to make it worthwhile for the readers.

Please continue since I'm eager to know the conclusion. Hopefully you won't think that I'm being overly critical. I just think you should consider longer chapters or less of a wait between chapters.

♡ Tara

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if i take my time to read your story it should be worth the ridiculous long annoying wait.. there are other authors on lit.. that makes u wait n wen they do u get 4 or 5 pages.. so its worth it..

your story progress is too slow as well and that too is from lack of material to read. i as a reader feel disconnected to ur story n have to reread prev chapters to remember where des new chap fits in and that in it self is unforgiveable

either update more frequently or long wait.. long chapter .. not a simple 2 page

You lot seem awfully entitled for the free work that someone is putting out. Would it be nice if the stories were longer/more frequent? Sure. Winning the lottery would be nice as well. Enjoy them as they come out

I love the story but like others it takes you awhile to post and that will kill off your readers who aren't patient enough to wait but for me it doesn't matter as long as you keep writing and will actually finish the story and thanks for another chapter

Everyone's got to start somewhere peeps and for most peeps on lit this isn't there full time job so give people a break and if you're getting bored go find some more stories to read.

Sol

please keep up this great story, don't worry about length or frequency of submittals I follow some authors that only post once a month 1 to 2 pages other time more pages. my fellow readers just need to suck it up, all we ask is that the story is completed,

just a note I follow one author who post once a year

This is a really good story. More frequent and longer chapters would be nice, but I also agree that this is not a persons full time job. If you want to read a story all at once, BUY a book and quit complaining.

Well worth waiting for

This is amazing you are so talented this should be published!

Waa, waa, waa, that's what I'm hearing from a lot of these posters! If you guys don't have the attention span to wait for new posts then take your negativity elsewhere! No-one cares how long you think the chapters should be this isn't your story to tell! Queenie you're doing a great job and if YOU want to do longer chapters then go for it (yes I would enjoy longer instalments but as a writer I do appreciate that it can be a pain in the arse especially when the ideas aren't flowing as much as you want! ;) ). I would rather read 2 pages of something your happy with than 4 or 5 of something that feels strained and pointless! Keep up the good work I'm really looking forward to this showdown between Logan and Kaine, just one thing if you aren't gonna kill Logan yet least let Kaine break his nose or something! Lol :)

Read and love the series, have you as a favorite author, so I can check back regularly for updates. Keep up the good work.

Can't wait to read the next chapter. I hope it will be uploaded soon.

Such a good story. Cant wait for the next chapter.

I`m totaly with Dalush... take the time you need as long as you don´t stop posting ;-)

Well done!

Next chapter please!!!!!!!!???????

Such a good story. I cant wait for the next chapter.

Kaine has grown on me, i didn't like him at first becausw of how he treated Luca. Xatie found jer TV w8lf snd had her first shift. Yay!!!

Yessss!!!

Kaine to the rescue...loving this story. A lot of high angst, high drama and close calls.

The storyline is keeping me on edge, definitely a good read.