All Comments on 'Heather Dared'

Stupid..................

ok i do love your stories , but this one, it could be it dose not fill in the gaps in the story how it was set up at the start i understand the bet but setting up the party taking heather into the room etc, i think its to short and could be much better like some of your other work which i am a fan of sorry they are my views, i look forward to the next one,

and it works very well as a vignette. Thank you.

This story seems to be a good character introduction to Heather. Hope to see more of Heather's dares.

As noted, it's a vignette. And a sexy one that could definitely be real! I, too, would like to hear more from Heather and Val - these two sound like fun!

Hot story—my only knock is that it’s too short. I want to hear more of Heather and Val. How does Heather get her revenge?