All Comments on 'Heavenly'

I like it. Both clearly shown to be powerful beings that are not to be fucked with… except when they desire it 😂. I like that Lucifer doesn’t immediately say yes, that he clearly suspects Lilith is playing some game and she basically has to go as him into dropping his walls. A interesting HOT dynamic.

What was this? A story needs a beginning a middle and an end and this has none. Where was Lilith, why did she want to meet Lucifer and so on. By the way Eve replaced Lilith not the other way around, Lucifer is not an archangel he is the angel of light. Michael is the only archangel and he may have a problem being called Lucifer’s brother. On the bright side it flowed well. Very few typos. My advice, try an outline before you begin. Your characters were intriguing, but you story was missing.