All Comments on 'Heaven's Door'

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A pleasant little story, quite touching in its own way and you certainly make the reader feel for poor Dana. It did set me wondering, though. I don't know about the US but here in the UK people eighteen years old are legally adults. If they are still at school (probably only a minority) they would not be treated like children. That aspect of the story seemed a little implausible to me. Still, certainly worth five stars.

wonderful, I love it ... please go on! I really hope there will be a part 2

Great writing style, good story idea.

Fantastic. 5 stars.

V into the interracial relationship representation. Love the chemistry btwn the two especially the open communication and consent happening. Can’t wait for more chapters!!! 5 ✨