- Lesbian Sex
- Heel or Heal
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Click hereBrenda smiled as she nodded and allowed Claudia to affix what was essentially a collar around her neck. The one inch leather in it's lock wasn't too tight, it fit snugly as it should. Claudia handed Brenda the key, cautioning her never to lose the key 'to her heart' as it would have to be cut off otherwise. The choker looked very chic on her neck and it signified that Claudia owned her. Brenda understood now. Claudia had patiently explained a few things to her since their bought of lovemaking. Not everyone could experience what Claudia had allowed her body to exhibit, not everyone was loved by a woman of such intense passions, but Claudia was willing to expose herself to Brenda, she was willing to try again. Perhaps her heart would heal now, she had someone new, someone different to lavish her love on. She had confided her story about Kailee with Brenda, lovemaking had apparently opened up a font of information now that they were intimate. Claudia had shared so much more of herself as they lay there in bed and she explained Brenda's role in her life now.
Brenda was happy with it, she was content. There was so much to learn yet, so much she wanted to learn about Claudia, about lovemaking, about herself but with a lover such as Claudia, she was willing.
~The End~ K'Anne
- COMMENTS
rml65almost 9 years agoFor stepping out of your comfort zone it was amazing! Totally loved it! Thank you!
Anonymousabout 11 years agoMany feel the set up for abuse in this story. You have it set up perfectly for both to gain a lot in this relationship. One gains a "partner" and the other gains confidence via collaring.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoThis is a good story, but it is seriously unfinished. Leaving it there is wrong. Please finish the story
Anonymousabout 12 years agoAll I could say is thanks for an awesome love story. Hope there's a part 2
Anonymousover 12 years agoYour writing is very thoughtful, gentle and intense. Frankly the thought of Brenda being drawn deeper into her submission is attractive, even if she isn't totally aware of what is happening and Claudia is. I hope you will continue the story of their journey.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agothe slow reeling in of the prize, the slow establishment of sensual control was such a turn on. brenda is in total compliance and deep down wants and craves more. you've shown your skill as a writer, to go outside your comfort zone!!!!
on the edge of my seat waiting 4 the next chapter :)
carrie
manlessalmost 13 years agoHaving lived this type of power exchange I like the story very much. It does not necessarily imply that the submissive has feelings of inferiority, it may just be a place she find comfort in, i know i do. You should try more along this line, Thank You.
KAnneMeinelalmost 13 years agoAuthorI totally agree and can't imagine this type of relationship. Most of my stories project strong women who are equal to the relationship. Strangely, as awkward as this story was for me, I already have a second chapter in mind that will have fans standing up and going hurray, or at least I HOPE so! Lol. For something that was outside my comfort zone, I need to complete it, so watch for chapter 2.
verbicidealmost 13 years agoK'anne, this story was so obviously different from what you normally write, I'm not surprised it came about by way of a request. As usual, I gave it 5 stars for the excellent writing, though the subject matter as presented was uncomfortable and not erotic for me. Claudia is written as a manipulator and a user. The descriptive term "cold fish" heaped upon her several times in actually inadequate, it would be more appropriate to call her a predator. Poor Brenda, I kept hoping for her eyes to open, figuratively speaking. There is no love with a person like this, only use and psychological abuse.
Still, an engaging read, even if the relationship between the lead characters made me a little queasy.
