All Comments on 'Heidi's Coronation Ch. 03'

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critiqD almost 4 years agoAuthor

Ch. 4 is coming soon.

Sorry this chapter is decidedly less-than action packed. Just some necessary plot filler. The next chapter is already on its way and should be up soon. Thanks!

Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

Herod or Darren?

Are they the same person? It's very confusing and disorienting. She had been eyeing Herod, then she started flirting with Darren. There was no clear transition.

Farben0192 almost 4 years ago

Thanks for the Installment

So now we're meeting Vishal's nephew? Maybe he's trying to cement his role in leading the kingdom by trying to get his nephew on the throne. Could be interesting to see if Darren is everything he seems to be. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing.

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