All Comments on 'Hell's Blonde'

You have created an interesting foundation here. lots of places it could go. Thank you.

***Thanks for the read.

ok...I thought there was more than just one page here. What are we supposed to think here? There are many ways to go with this.

How about......since this is literotica....they get into a relationship of some sort. A little dance back and forth that leads somewhere.

Very good.

Really?

Umm, no way. Her violent reaction toward the MC is just casually shrugged off because she is hot. It removes any conflict, any chance of an “enemy to lovers” type of situation. It would have been more interesting if she has blamed him for the pie on the wall, management had billed him, the two of them argued about it, they did petty revenge type shit, and then eventually fell into bed together due to the underlying sexual tension. Delay the revelation about the mother until later on. Adults don’t meet and ask each other to be friends like children do, they build up to it. And there is no reason for the MC to want to be her friend or vice versa.

What N awesome start to a story! Look forewarn to more to come! Lots of clues to be had; lots of directions it can go!….

Maybe move in the direction of romance and see where it might go