by INWriterLit2
Sorry couldn't get passed the 1st sentence please find an English speaking editor for your future efforts..
25 chapters? All a few paragraphs long? Guess I'll wait until you have all 25 posted, then bother with this.
Good try on a touchy topic. Illicit drugs, career at stake, life style in jeapordy . . .
Please, find a Proof Reader to helook with editing,
tense and spelling.
Your story can and will improve UT you need outside assistance.
Best of luck on future chapters.