All Comments on 'Helping Charlize'

Literal garbage.

All the misgivings you had in writing this were not warranted. This is not non-consent.

Too blatant. Too ridiculous. Nobody could be that stupid. Especially without protection

for poor people. Not that it is bad, but it lacks details - we even barely know how she looks, not to talk from any more specific details (how it all changes from consensual to non-consensual) etc. Apart from that: it has a LOT of potential!!!!

No, seriously. What the fuck was that shit.

You all are brutal! This is an older story of mine. I think I wrote it four years ago. It's definitely not my best work but I do believe that girls like Charlize exist and that older men tend to take advantage of their agreeableness. Many young girls do not learn to tell men no. No one teaches them that. That is why I think of this as nonconsent. She passively goes along with this but she doesn't really know what she is doing at all. That's what I find hot about it. I like the thought of a man overpowering or steamrolling a much younger woman until she is saying yes when she means no. The power play here is psychological. This is also a very, very short story and I feel I packed a lot into a tiny space, just like this dude packed a shit ton into Charlize's tiny pussy. :)

I tend to disagree with my fellow readers. This is a five star story. This story is what nonconsent is all about. It's about power. It's all about power of the man over the woman. The neighbor weasn't an intrinsic rapist, but he rose to the occasion so to speak (apologies for the bad pun). You have illustrated that brilliantly in a short, powerful story. Congratulations. -- JB

This is not bad AT ALL! Y’all just like that vanilla stuff 😂