All Comments on 'Helping Hand - Day 01'

Interesting premise, a new twist. Just don't make him an asshole.

Good story. is there no day 2 yet?

Great work kid, don't get cocky

Lots of potential with this one. It'll be interesting to see how it plays out since only one target is affected by the mind control, and it's not a complete personality overwrite.

Great story, thank you for writing it! Definitely looking forward to part 2.