All Comments on 'Helping the Homeless Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

'More', is the key word.

Want to see the change in Alexa through Reginald's doing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

you let the husband discover it very easily

you should have gangbanged first

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great. Alexa needs to give in and let Reggie turn her out. Make her nearly unrecognizable to her husband when he gets back. Take her out and give her a total slut make over on her husband's credit card. New slutty hair, nails, clothes, shoes. Then get her some tattoos and piercings. Finish her off at a sex shop with some accessories. Butt plugs, nipple clamp chains, bbc dildo. Top it off with a collar and leash for showing her off to his "friends".

hindsight2020hindsight2020over 1 year ago

Stop the 12 year old racist fantasy crap!

1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Damn this is hot, waiting for part 3

Amiable69Amiable69over 1 year ago

Excellent! Looking forward to the story unfolding. Amy. x

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved it, 5 Stars. Loved the dirty talk from Alexa.

Enterprise1701AEnterprise1701Aover 1 year ago
Such a good story...

... and then you fuck it up by having her call him "Master". What bullshit.

WatchingthewatcherWatchingthewatcherover 1 year ago

Honestly, I did not enjoy this chapter of the story. The first chapter ending was filled with potential and now, well I think you have gone down the usual gangbang route which I believe is more fantasy than reality. But as I said before, the story is yours to tell as you like and I respect that. But on the other hand, I know what it is that holds my interests. Thanks for writing and if there is a third chapter, I will for sure read it.

Wendywants2BtakenWendywants2Btakenover 1 year ago

Yessss to be turned out by a strong Blackman to his friends god I would love it!❤️❤️❤️❤️

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please continue :)

threeman45threeman45over 1 year ago
Looking forward to more

Great start, love to see where you go with this.

PiusPaulPiusPaulabout 1 year ago

Great chapter! But awfully short!! Hopefully we don´t have to wait too long for the next one.

The twist of Jake finding out his wife was cheating on him, and him coming out of his tranny loving-closet at the same time was brilliant. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Awesome story. I love this kind of stuff, and love that she’s about to be shared with his unsavory friends. I’m REALLY looking forward to the next chapter. I hope that comes out soon😀

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Looking forward to the continuing story

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Too short and moving a little too fast. With the theme, this story needs to take its time and stretch into multiple chapters. Which means it needs to continue for a long period of time

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I think it'd be hot if she got a brutal punishment next chapter and became a ruined woman while her husband and daughter leave her.

BigbrownpandabearBigbrownpandabear4 months ago

I think this would be fantastic if we carried on down the path that you have but husband and wife leading to separate sex lives and then in the end it bring them closer together and more in love than ever and the people that they are having sex with are also in love with them as well. And they realised they can be three people in a relationship.

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