All Comments on 'Helping the Secret Patient'

The story was over too soon. The guys could have been working on her for a few more days while she was in her room. We could be "hearing" her as she was stimulated but still unresponsive. She could have been fucked a few times by the guys as well as some friends. Afterwards, they would help clean up. Over time she would wake up and think it was all a dream but it would also implant suggestions to turn more to porn videos. Good short story.

For this being only your second story you've done so far I think you did a great job. Keep up the good it becomes easier overtime.

I think they should have turned her over and fucked her up the ass also.

It was creepy! The setting was too plausible, though well told! I've been a patient in hospitals on occasion. I'm a man, and not at risk so much, but I realized how dependent I was on the nurses and doctors for my care.