All Comments on 'Hemmings Descent Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting story line. Tom now has two mistresses to contend with. Keeping them both satisfied will be quite a chore. I think jo should be given more privilege to discipline Tom. What about Susie's friends should they be entertained by helping train Tom. Certainly jo has serious potential to be a very strict mistress. You have a lot of avenues to pursue. Keep writing. And we will keep reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fortunate Thomas! He has landed in a paradise that anyone would wish for. Well written, and very plausible, too. Please keep writing more of this happy tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Keep it up. Love it

wifeserverwifeserverover 1 year ago

Absolutely lovely story line. Excellent writing makes it seem nearly possible. One cannot conceive of a more appealing situation than being abused and punished by one's wife and her two bratty teenage daughters. Please write sequels.

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