All Comments on 'Henri Towns Artist'

great story part 2+

This may be one of your best yet....

Fun little fantasy, but the writing doesn’t flow well. The dialogue particularly is extremely stilted. Try reading out loud and ask yourself if anyone ever speaks like that. There are too many errors, and each one stops the read, and you have a habit of creating sentence fragments which have no verb. Disappointing.

Love your work. And Janice is just warming up embracing her beauty with confidence and pride

Love to see Jan naked the front of whole office and at home too. Great story.

Loving this story. Partly for the content, as I know several well to do people that I could picture doing similar things, and partially because im familiar with the locality of the story!