by kevinlaroche
Aww, this is perfect. A nerdy submissive guy finds the girl of his dreams by doing a good turn for her, and then she takes excellent care of him. She claims him and then marries him. I love this story, and hope that my wife would be just like Lindsay.
I'll admit some of your stories are hit and miss but this one definitely hit. Enjoyable with a nice loving happy ending at least for the two main characters.
Of all of your stories, this is my favourite. I like that the hero gets to be a hero for the heroine, who appreciates him and doesn't abuse his love. I like that there's an unequivocally happy ending, and that Lindsay's dominant personality is a loving one.
The humiliation of Lisa isn't really my personal cup of tea, but I can see how the main characters need it, and it is one of the staples of the genre. I would like to see more characters like Rob in your stories, who can still crave their dominant leading ladies while being heroic and getting happy endings.