All Comments on 'Her Dom Ch. 01'

Perfect opening. Can't wait to see what happens.

but the kidnapping setup puts me off. I feel like this story belongs in the nonconsent category, at least so far.

whips, chains, and leather aren't enough by themselves. BDSM requires consent. Nobody but a poser would try anything like this in real life, and nobody in the scene would ever have anything to do with him if he did.

excellent! Quite a lovely set-up for what's to come. Thanks and 5 stars for ya'. Take care of the muse...

This chapter is noncon. Good noncon but still noncon. That aside, it was well written until you pulled out the dreaded 'deep down inside.' That line is right down there with 'true self' and the worst of the worst 'what i/you was/were born for/to be.' Ugh. Never ever ever use those lines. Off to read where you went wwith this.