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Click here"YO FAMILY," bellowed the familiar voice of our brother. Holly quickly kissed me on the lips. and moved with grace to the far end of the couch. Josh threw his duffel bag down as he entered the lounge. and dropped himself in between us and put an arm around each of our shoulders. We both leaned in simultaneously to kiss him on his cheek. He smiled, that knowing smile. OH SHIT! He knows, how does he always know. He sniffed, he could smell the sex in the air.
"So, you found my old stash of weed then?" I breathed an audible sigh of relief "Don't worry, I won't tell mom and dad". He then eyed the coffee table and my throat filled with my heart. "What's this? Estonian folk tales." My heart dropped, not completely.
"Hey bro, want a beer?" Said Holly immediately scooping up the pad as she slid away to the kitchen.
"Why thank you, dear sis, see that's how you should treat your big brother when he drives thousands of miles from California to see you."
"I can see the airline tag on your bag genius."
"Excuse me," said Holly entering with a beer and no notepad which would have been some very damning evidence "I'm the genius here." She sat down next to Josh, but I could see in her eyes she wanted to sit next to me because she gave a very intent look at my lips.
"Fine, I would have driven but I needed to be home before Mom and Dad. I come bearing gifts."
He handed us an envelope each. We opened them unsure of what to expect, both contained a driver's license. "Check the ages," I scanned the card.
"21," I exclaimed.
"You got us fake IDs?" Holly pounced on him hugging him. I wasn't jealous; she touched me way more intimately.
"Of course. I want you to actually enjoy college, even if you did steal all my weed," He joked.
"You weren't using it anymore," Holly replied. He smiled his knowing smile and stood "I'm out, got an important errand but I'll be back tonight, don't die or anything while I'm gone." A classic Joshua Lake exit, dweeb, although a loveable dweeb.
Holly shot me a mischievous grin.
"Can I buy my girlfriend a drink?" flashing me her new fake ID.
***
My memory was disturbed by a knock on the door. I had no desire to answer it. There was only one thing I desired and she was gone. I'd checked every possible social network and called all of their cellphones, all disconnected. The knocking continued. They'll go, and hopefully, I can try to recall another time before I left. Before I destroyed the most precious thing in my life. At another set of knocking, I finally answered armed with a few choice words. I swung it open and instead of berating them I stood stunned before asking,
"What the Hell are you doing here?"
- COMMENTS
mehodge4over 2 years agovery good story line keep it up. the set up was very good with the brother and mom and dad. i kind of did that last part the brother did in church, but i called the catholic priest a lying hypocrite and child molester
superrenalmost 3 years agoAuthorIs it tacky to comment on one's own story? Nevermind. I want to let you all know that this story will continue. I started the story as a way to pass time during the pandemic. As lockdown has been easing my job is taking up a lot more of my time and writing has been put on the back burner. I am about 3/4 of the way through part 2 and part 3 has already been mapped out. I'm thinking I will start writing part 3 before I post part 2 so there will be much less time between releases. As for an ETA, probably mid-June, with part 3 not long after. The support for this story means the absolute world to me and the fact that people have taken the time to vote and comment means even more. Thank you to all for waiting so patiently, you're all amazing.
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Quirinusalmost 3 years agoI held off on reading this for quite a while, both because I know that I am sometimes disproportionately affected by unhappy endings and because you said you were planning to continue writing. I thought I'd wait until more of the story became available.
I was recently reminded of how helpful encouragement can be in the struggle to continue writing, so, having now read this installment, I am here to say that I very much enjoyed your story, and that you will certainly have an audience if and when you decide to continue it.
redever69about 3 years agoI don't comment much but this was outstanding work and I look forward to more... a lot more, I hope. Great writing style. Sad (poor Josh) and actually humorous at times, like the quirky twin-speak. I was hoping there would be more with Stephanie but alas there was not...unless maybe she's going to Yale? One can only hope. Here's to more of the good 'ol 69, my person favorite and I really hope you keep Josh away from the girls' intimacy even if he is their 'cool' brother. Sister+sister=fun...brother+sister=not fun. Very curious to see how things fall apart as the intro and ending looked pretty bleak. Keep up the great work!
Anonymousover 3 years agoI normally don’t make comments on here, but I wanted to for this story. Despite your warning, this was better than many of the stories I’ve read on here. The characters were amazing, and that’s great because they’re the most important part of works like this. They had great build up, and actually had that sense of you know, character to them, which many authors fail to do.
I’m excited to see where things go in the next part, and I hope to read it very soon!
