All Comments on 'Her Fiancé's Father Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Welcome back!!

Dude, I for one am very happy you decided to resume this very hot story. Keep going. This is excellent stuff. I like this character Jack, and his daughter in law is a lot of fun too. The family situation is ideal for some kinky sex. Looking forward to a lot more.

Cutie18Cutie18over 14 years ago
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You are a great writer.but why stop?keep writting.

saxenars3saxenars3almost 13 years ago
Abrupt ending

If this is the end, then it is quite abrupt - otherwise the story is quite good, though there are a few incidences which appear to be quite dramatic and fictitious - hopefully you would lead this story to a logical ending

Best wishes

ramonbrookramonbrookover 10 years ago
This was a great series .... But

Why did you stop? I know there were seven INCREDIBLY EROTIC stories but there is so much more to be told! I know it's been a decade since you last wrote a chapter to the series but I'm hoping you start it up again

magic10fingers4magic10fingers4almost 4 years ago
Enraptured~

Your tale is consuming! Just perfect for these times!

Hiker66BikerHiker66Bikerover 2 years ago

The dastardly scoundrel Jack is my hero, but I’m not into the Carmen/son scenario or anal (what is wrong with good old fashioned fucking?). 4 stars.

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I write because I enjoy it. I've been weaving erotic stories since I was a teenager - first with my sister, then by myself. I have published my stories on a variety of sites. I'm always looking to improve. So send me your feedback! My Jack Grierson series of stories is a bod...

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