by jxa2012
Dude, I for one am very happy you decided to resume this very hot story. Keep going. This is excellent stuff. I like this character Jack, and his daughter in law is a lot of fun too. The family situation is ideal for some kinky sex. Looking forward to a lot more.
If this is the end, then it is quite abrupt - otherwise the story is quite good, though there are a few incidences which appear to be quite dramatic and fictitious - hopefully you would lead this story to a logical ending
Best wishes
Why did you stop? I know there were seven INCREDIBLY EROTIC stories but there is so much more to be told! I know it's been a decade since you last wrote a chapter to the series but I'm hoping you start it up again
The dastardly scoundrel Jack is my hero, but I’m not into the Carmen/son scenario or anal (what is wrong with good old fashioned fucking?). 4 stars.