All Comments on 'her Heart Ch. 06'

While I understood why the male is always capitalized and the female is lower case, it was slightly distracting. Every time I saw "He," I was reminded of the Bible. I found my reaction to the use of "Wwe" and "Ttheir" and "Oour" etc. interesting. It served to emphasize how strongly the written word impacts my brain, as I found myself literally stumbling past each of these variations (I'm not sure what to call them. They are technically mis-spelled words, yet purposely so.) I would lose the train of thought and have to re-read the sentence.<br><br>

I felt the poignant longing of your story. And was left wondering why these two can't meet, and why they can't set specific times to even converse on-line. Is that part of the Dom/Sub relationship too? Or just the vagaries of life?