All Comments on 'Her Master's Eyes Ch. 01'

by James G 5

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Luna_Wolf72Luna_Wolf72over 20 years ago
Scary but good

SOmetimes, You really worry me. Loved the idea behind the story as well as the way it's written. Get Your bum in gear and finish this..don't leave me hanging...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Mmmmmm

And I wonder how he will continue this story.......will it be a true razor, or maybe it is a claw........one can never tell with you! Lixxxxxxx

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
I LOVE sharp objects

I want to know where the blade is going next! Bound :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Knives yumm

Absolutely love it!! Leaves me hanging though.......could ya ummm hurry up and finish it?? dymond

leaf_shadowsleaf_shadowsover 19 years ago
Good start - now END IT!

Adding to the clamor of "write the rest, write the rest!!"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Thanks

Great start - please please please finish :)

jeepgirl75 on lj - came in from a bad_sex entry

SafraSafraover 16 years ago

Damn! 4 years since the last comment and plea for continuation of this gorgeous story!

I suppose James' life has changed a whole lot since the writing of the story and there is no chance for a finish...

What a terrible shame!!! :(

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