All Comments on 'Her Prize'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wholesome Rape?

This might technically be rape, but it has such a wholesome vibe to it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

And that's how I met your mother

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

and that's how I met your mother

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I wanted her to teach him to lick her pussy. Chapter 2, please!

linnearlinnearover 2 years ago

I so wanted more and definitely wanted him going down on her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A bare bones story told in a rather childish manner. There’s s kernel of good story here that need’s fleshing out. Looks like a first attempt from a young writer. 3 stars for now.

Bill S.

TomdullyTomdully10 months ago

this is a good story of the genre' where men act like women.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Short, sharp, punchy. Enough passion injected to make it salacious. Thank you

Anonymous
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