All Comments on 'Her Son Her Lover'

Giving right into the kissing was bad enough while verbally protesting but then the double EE’s. I didn’t read any further but I am guessing he has a 10 inch cock too.

Where are all the good writers these days?

I did not continue reading this story past the first few paragraphs. The son was "six and seven"?? You desperately need to proofread AND find an editor. No rating from me.

Definetly needs a part 2

Thanks for your comments.

Just to better explain: "six and seven" means "six feet, seven inches". Sorry.

Started good but then just wandered all over the place. Who cares about Lucio and Carol. Total slut Mom is not erotic. You need an editor pretty badly.

Reasonable, but as ever he has to be Donky Kong with a huge Dick

I gave it a 3

Two meters in the air?

He lifted her above his head?

What on earth for?

It started out ok but you lost it....the story became boring and not believable. Not fun, not sexy, lame. I could not finish it. Sorry * for this one....

It was a grate story had me horny as hell, Keep them CUM ING..

Most of these writers make it so unbelievable it takes away from the eroticism of the story everybody's not John Holmes with a fence post size dick and all the women don't have tits like watermelons with a manatee sized ass come on get real

Didn’t understand why Lucio was brought into story. Did nothing but add space. Now if you had added Carole and Anne as companions to Helen would have made a better storyline.