All Comments on 'Her Soulmate's Wife'

If you wrote this in the first person of one of the ladies, you wouldn't have to keep repeating the names over and over. Try it. I think it's sexier, too.

I liked this one and enjoyed it a lot. It was nice and short, sweet yet hot, and actually reminded me of a similar *ahem* adventure I had a few years ago. Which in my case turned out differently but was fun while it lasted. *S*

Thanks for sharing!

Also, Larry** gives a good suggestion.

Good story!

Licking her cervix? Rather impossible. God story otherwise.