by alcyon1977
I liked this one and enjoyed it a lot. It was nice and short, sweet yet hot, and actually reminded me of a similar *ahem* adventure I had a few years ago. Which in my case turned out differently but was fun while it lasted. *S*
Thanks for sharing!
Also, Larry** gives a good suggestion.
If you wrote this in the first person of one of the ladies, you wouldn't have to keep repeating the names over and over. Try it. I think it's sexier, too.