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@Devilsoctane, you beautifully told the story of Paul, Mandy and Charlotte, their friendship and then Paul's transformation into his sister Charlotte for a ballet performance and especially the feelings that arose between Paul-Charlotte and Mandy. Will it be something more than just a moment of infatuation or sex? How will Paul and Mandy feel about this moment together, and what will his sister Charlotte say about Paul's transformation into a girl? Will she accept this change and Paul's infatuation with Mandy, or maybe she will join in the further transformation - the feminization of her brother? I would love to be Paul-Charlotte.

ps. Sorry for any errors and linguistic inaccuracies, I don't speak English.

SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. 📖👩🏻‍🦳♀️❤️🧒🏻⚧👧🏻.

Please, please, please, please, please google “how to write dialogue in fiction writing”.

I love your content and story ideas but your unconventional style is too distracting