All Comments on 'Her Useless Boyfriend'

by ApolloniaHeaven

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MigbirdMigbirdabout 2 months ago

Liked the premise; could have ramped up/prolonged/intensified the sex given the erotic scene (and lesson) you created. Appears he listened, let’s hope he learned. Nice short piece.

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Every now and then I have a writing fever and get a little spicy with it.