All Comments on 'Her Victim, His Bully Ch. 01'

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toy4LadyandDon2toy4LadyandDon2over 3 years ago
nice start

i love the premise of the story but it needs editing badly. get that done and it could be a solid 4 or 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Like it so far

Good start. I really like your other stories, as I'm a femdom story fan, and I'm looking forward to finding out just how you take this story forward.

Catman290Catman290over 2 years ago

This was, surprisingly.. good ...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

How the hell is just eating a salad and some bread healthy? Only if you are trying to lose weight is that a good idea. Add some high protein food and get rid of the bread

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