All Comments on 'Heretic Ch. 02'

You write action well, good attention to spatial details and to movement, and you write beautiful erotic moments that tie in well with the characters development. Amazing work, hope to see more.

You tell us that you enjoy .., “writing sexually centered swords and sorcery tales.” Well, for one that was abundantly clear in the Pressed Violet, a frightening, beautiful, erotically poignant love story. Now you share the Heretic with gruesome descriptions of unearthly violence, highly erotic immersive sex scenes, flawed, captivating characters and exchanges that prompt us to pause and reflect. OK - pretty clear that I like your writing. Thanks for sharing.

Geat story and enjoyable reading. Hope you continue this excellent story. It appears that our warrior nun is slipping deeper into the darkness. The chapter ended with her being her seduction of Sister Rochelle. Ward Master