Hesitation

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JimBob44
JimBob44
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"In seven, did you just say..." Edward asked, mouth open in shock.

"Trick or treat," Terri called back, smiling.

THE END

**Author's Note: I write these stories for my pleasure; I post them here for your enjoyment. I thank you sincerely for reading my stories.

I especially thank those that take the time to leave comments, good and bad. I do read all comments. I also thank those that take the time to rate my tales.

Some of you will recognize the crowd at Bully Burger. Edgar Carroll, Lisette, Annabelle, and Annabelle's best friend Grace. They were the primary characters in 'Under Tornado Warning' in the Loving Wives category.

(An N'Awlins Burger has olive dressing, provolone cheese and a nice dusting of cayenne pepper. Okay, so I made that up.)

The Reverend Wright and his wife Linda are prominently featured in the 'Just A Nice Boy' series in the 'Incest/Taboo' category.

Have a most sparkly day. If you're happy and you know it, shave a beaver. If you're happy and you know it, shave a beaver. If you're happy and you know it and you really want to show it, if you're happy and you know it, shave a beaver.

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

quite surprising ,at first you think he's just a letch,perving on a young pregnant girl . then he actually changes from being sort of a dirty old man into a likable guy . kinda sneaks up on being a nice guy,and the age difference doesn't seem to matter in the end . very good, ,thanks .

DwarfLord50DwarfLord506 months ago

That was a lot of fun. I’ve always enjoyed stories where you see something kinda broken get rebuilt into something good and strong. Well done!

WisquejacWisquejac6 months ago

Good times. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

That was fun. And, oh the joy of a family fight at thanksgiving. Lol 5 stars. DMW aka Sumnut

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

10 stars! Wonderful story. Terri may be young, but from the time she met him, she loved her husband without question Even being with child, she probably would have beaten Roberta bloody for hurting Edward, the father of his namesake and father of Terri Deubler's new baby she has in her oven. Unconditional love!

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