All Comments on 'Hidden Feelings'

really good story hope to see more from you

There are no mountain views in South Florida :-)

Well written, keep up the stories

The story was very sensual and loving.

Please, keep writing more.

It's a fictional place, and SHH ;)

Great story, erotic and sexy - keep writing

Sweet and sexy - wonderful combination, and rare. Love it!

...but the sun doesn't set in the west in Florida.

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Be quiet and enjoy the story =D

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I liked it! Please write more of the same couple - it seems that they have a really interesting future in front of them.

It has all the good points it needs.

just lovely. =)

This had loads of potential but you rushed it. I find it unrealistic that after keeping it a secret for however long, her friend would tell her that she loved her the day her mother died. Good framework for a story, but not filled out enough. Would like to read more of your writing tho.

One of the hottest stories I've read on this site! Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

Mmm.