All Comments on 'Hidden Feelings'

Mmm.

One of the hottest stories I've read on this site! Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

This had loads of potential but you rushed it. I find it unrealistic that after keeping it a secret for however long, her friend would tell her that she loved her the day her mother died. Good framework for a story, but not filled out enough. Would like to read more of your writing tho.

just lovely. =)

I liked it! Please write more of the same couple - it seems that they have a really interesting future in front of them.

It has all the good points it needs.

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Be quiet and enjoy the story =D

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...but the sun doesn't set in the west in Florida.

Sweet and sexy - wonderful combination, and rare. Love it!

Great story, erotic and sexy - keep writing

It's a fictional place, and SHH ;)

The story was very sensual and loving.

Please, keep writing more.

Well written, keep up the stories

There are no mountain views in South Florida :-)

really good story hope to see more from you