All Comments on 'Hide and Seek'

- if a little on the short side. I look forward to reading more - oh, and welcome to Literotica, it's always good to have new writers aboard.

4 *s - and I'll be watching for part two soon.

traci

I think this is really good! hope there is another chapter coming

Although if it turns out that he has a magic cock and she submits to him I’m gonna hurl, because that’s just...no.