by oneagainst
Love the twist to this story glad fee and her husband are on Alice and James side and she got to have her husband in a loving way your so good at teasing your reader great story thank you
Your creativeness, mastery of writing, and story structures are excellent. I love your characters, character development, and how you weave, albeit momentarily, characters from other stories into this series. Thank you for sharing your talents and brilliant ideas.
Hate to see high life come to a close without a true ending. I understand the mixing of stories that you do but who knows I might be dead by august. but thanks for sharing and giving us your time and talents.
Pappasleaze
Ah... I'm sorry to see such a captivating tale come to a conclusion. A 5 star story to be sure.
Oh man, I was kinda hoping Jodie found out about Alice's attempt to win. Maybe a Choose Your Own Adventure?
One idea:
Likely some chaos ensues when Jodie tried to ensnare someone who just does not play her game. Possibly in the ensuing chaos some info is found and used.
Love the story. Hope it comes to an ending at some point.
Was hoping for Alice to be made to lick pussy at some point.
But, love your story!
Turns out she absolutely has been betrayed and cannot trust her husband or Fee. Well according to the end of the story anyway; feel quite betrayed myself.