All Comments on 'High School Beautiful Ch. 04'

by Ravensing

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HaydenDLinderHaydenDLinderover 6 years ago
B-?!

What a dick.

5 stars again.

I will say I find myself really enjoying this series but...

I think you need more intimacy between the characters,

Like in your time series, my favorite part was when he was with the professor. It was the intimacy between them that made it a great chapter for me.

Just my two cents.

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On makeshift bedding in the cucumber garden, the hilltribe girl clings to her exhausted lover. Limbs still chaffing with pleasure, dissolving against him she now and again with one bare foot jostles a shell necklace that hangs from a vine on the fence - rattling it though th...

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