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I heard a noise and my head turned to the bedroom door, which had been open a bit, and noticed it closing, just a glimpse of someone outside peeking in. I wondered if it was her dad and suddenly got worried.
"Mandy. I think someone was watching us. We're not going to be in trouble, are we?"
She kissed my cheek. "I'm sure it was your imagination. They shouldn't be home for almost fifteen minutes yet. But we do need to get dressed. I wouldn't want him to actually catch us like this."
"Oh hell no. He'd call my dad and I'd be grounded for a month." Tina said, pulling off of me. "Oh fuck, look at all that." She said, as my cum leaked out of her and dripped from her pussy onto my cock.
Mandy got off the bed and got a towel from the bathroom and wiped Tina's pussy and then my dick. The two of them stayed naked while they dressed me, making sure to rub their tits and pussies all over my body while they did. After they both dressed and were just finishing when we heard her mom call up the stairs that they were home.
"Good timing." Tina said with a grin.
"Come on. I'll drive you both home."
We went down and she said bye to her mom and dad as we headed out the door. She dropped Tina off first and then drove me home. We sat in the car for almost ten minutes, kissing and groping each other, Mandy telling me how she wished she had time to let me undress her and have sex again with her, right there in the car. I was definitely turned on by the kissing and touching and wouldn't have objected either, but she stopped me as I was starting to undo her bra under her shirt. "I want this, but I have to get home. Tomorrow. I promise. More tomorrow!" I nodded and stopped, trying not to let the disappointment show.
- COMMENTS
Comentarista8210 months agoYou clearly inject far more fantasy into this than reality supports as, geek or not, he will certainly gain more support from fellow geeks, some from non-athletes and maybe a few strokes from athletes; he will not, however, get every girl trying to feel his butt because of this one-time thing. He'd certainly get respect for trying, but not the notoriety ascribed by the story.
Several others such as a fellow poster (Demosthenes) correctly state this is more erotic couplings than romance. What disturbs me is that you retcon your own work by employing Mandy to state she doesn't know why when she clearly explained in Ch 1 that she wanted to give him a chance because "he never had any expectations for her" after he helped her and tutored her. Certainly for that major omission and the very odd anatomy and spelling mistakes, -1 star. The other -1 star comes from the nurse humping any male in the school: for all the students to know she reigns as the Queen of Hoedom means every administrator in the school would have to be blind and deaf to not hear the school gossip and especially not to investigate it. Clearly involving the school nurse inserts more fantastic elements into this, but it stretches credulity to think he's 1) dumb enough to tell Mandy and 2) that Mandy would want to hear it. Then we have Tina for "protection"? A few could argue to fit this into Group Sex and even Voyeurism--not romance.
We do learn he helped Mandy for 2 years, and that filled in a nice piece of the puzzle. You do explain her thinking as to why there could have been other reasons for her attraction to him. However, while you established her as a fiery and feisty redhead, you draw her behavior to deviate from that in this chapter; redheads are NOT known for being particularly understanding, tend to be quick-tempered (meaning the average reader would have expected Mandy to go slap the nurse for encroaching on her "man") and a bit more possessive than other women. So yeah...you muddied the waters unnecessarily here for whatever reasons. 3
Anonymousabout 1 year agoAgreed, it doesn't seem to be a romance. Probably erotic couplings. Maybe mind control? He's not doing anything like that consciously, but Mandy's little I-don't-understand speech sure sounds like that's involved. I'd say the same for the nurse, except apparently she screws every male patient she gets.
(Seriously, that kind of I-don't-understand-this-but-I-can't-help-myself speech is usually a sign of a story that doesn't make sense. The author knows the reader's going to say it doesn't make sense, so he tries to sound profound by saying it first.)
I'm enjoying the story despite that and the typos and all the rest of that, for what it's worth, but it's not the story it could be if you had real characters instead of cardboard people whose only real purpose is to screw endlessly.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoSorry, but I stopped reading at the scene with the nurse. This sort of juvenile fantasy just doesn’t appeal to me.
