All Comments on 'Highland Heaven'

I love it, not just for the obvious reason, but because is is so you, beautiful, loving and full of heart xxxxx

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Well, that was a right proper love letter. The genuine adoration radiated off the page. And above that Eagle flying over the two true lovers way up in their Highland Heaven, was, undoubtedly, a multitude of angels, smiling down on the utterly splendid scene. Quite a debut JPintraining. I would say your training has paid off. I look forward to "another story" that you alluded to at the end of this lovely and erotic tale. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

If this is the starting standard of your stories to come we are all in for a treat. Fabulous love story, emotional, arousing, satisfying in its message.

I don't know if you have written before but this is very promising. There are a few little things that could be sorted by careful proofreading: odd bits of punctuation, a couple of upper case letters where unnecessary (some could be the result of fast typing). With Pixie as a mentor you shouldn't go far wrong. Anyway, it's five stars and hope to see more from you soon.

[I e-mailed Pixie recently with congratulations on your engagement, June, and I'd like to extend them to you. Also, I hope that your mother can regain her health in time.]

Great story please continue.

Beautiful scenery, romantically beautiful, erotic scene — easily imagined. Thanks for sharing.

Thank you my darling Pix, without you, I would be nothing…💋❤️

Thank you anonymous, your comments are both encouraging and appreciated for me to continue

Cleeve , that means so much…Thank you

Maonaigh, your comments are well taken, I hope to improve..thank you

Anonymous…..chapter 2 is on its way…thank you

You drew a beautiful picture for us.you made us feel part of your love making,and the splendid Highland hills.dont stop june

Migbird, thank you for your kind comment, it means a lot as this is my first story.

Thank you Caz, 💋…you are such a great support and I glad you enjoyed it.

Such a wonderful and powerful debut story. The love you have for Pixie radiates from every words and sentence. I look forward to reading more from you.

JP - Great imagery with the scenery in the Highlands and a nice love story. Thank you for sharing!

Thank you so much Lindi, it means so much to me to have so many kind comments. Look forward to chatting with you again soon. 💋 I hope you enjoy ( part 2 ) just as much.

Very nice first story, look forward to more adventures of you and Pix, from someone else's POV

I loved the scene, background and story. The shared connection both of you have for each other was so evident. It hit the right note... Loved it

Thanks Sexxyboi, I hope everyone that reads my story enjoys it like you did.

Hi Jack, glad you enjoyed this story..perhaps you will enjoy more in the future.

Dearest Gerri

Any compliment from you is taken to my heart, Thank you 💋

Look forward to a chat sometime soon.

My love

June

This has to most romantic Short story I have read in like forever. You could tell June and Pix were in love from the get go. The hike was just an extension of the love these two had and the skinny dipping was just more fuel to the story. You could just feel the love It was so well written.

Well done.

Thank you Fandeboris, this is my first story so I’m extremely humbled.

June, I loved this and wish to echo Maonaigh's remark that this is impressive for a writing debut. Your sense of place, atmosphere and emotions are very well done. 5 well deserved stars from me. Now on to part 2. :)

Anna

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Beautifully written, June!

Full of sincerity, emotion, and scenic imagery.

The love you share with Pixie radiates brilliantly from the story!

Dearest Anna,

Thank you…to receive comments like that from you mean so much. Enjoy Parts 2 and 3 💋💋

My darling June, just so delighted at the reception of this and the whole trilogy. Some excellent writers and critics have confirmed that you really are a talented writer - as well as being my darling wife and love. I love you xxxxx

Thank you so much Paul

Dearest Pixie, you know I could not have even begun to write this without you.

Love has strength, even beyond the obvious.

As ever YOUR June

A beautiful start! I loved the tease of shopping, the hints as they held hands walking out of the store and their love for each other. Looking forward to more 5 🌟 Just beautiful

Aoife, thank you for your kind comments. I hope you enjoy the trilogy.

Found you! I've just finished reading Pixiehoff's latest, "The Lady and the Orphan", which I enjoyed a great deal. I have been following your wife for some time and I love her work. She is kind enough to reply to some of the comments I make on her stories, and when she said that you'd be writing the rest of the Lady/Orphan serial, I wanted to make sure that I had notification when it was published. So now I'm following you too! And how glad I am. This is a delightful story. As soon as I've finished typing this, I'm off to read the other 2 chapters. You get 5 stars from me for this opening chapter.

Olsen, thank you so much, I’m learning all the time.

Hopefully the full series of the Orphan will be published very soon.

Olwen, please forgive my iPad’s typo..I am so sorry

Too many typos, it spoils the flow of the story.

Enjoyed it in spite of the typos :)

Thank you Sarah

😱 Oh No!... Not Typos!!

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Hallo June!

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With all of those horrible typos, Queen Jackie and I were only able to have 5 orgasms 😢..

Will Love, I have found that some people just aren't happy unless they are complaining about something or someone... my point, he's reading a "FREE" beautifully written hot and sexy love story, and all he's thinking about is typos....... REALLY!?!

Thank-You, we loved It... 5-Stars and 5-Sticky Wet Orgasms,,, Yes!

The Black Queen 👩🏿‍ and Gay Kat 👩🏼..

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Oh Yes!... Typos!!!

Comments pertain to all matters concerning the story. If you are looking for compliments then be honest and let readers know that negative comments hurt your feelings.

Hi Black Queen and Gay Kat

I appreciate your comments and delighted it excited you.

Thank you

Great.A bit short but very arousing.Thanks.

Nobody is perfect and nothing is perfect, just our imagination give this bullshit ‚perfection‘ kind of intelligence sense ….. so the tale ist is, the the love you described so beautiful, not only the sex ….. finding a soulmate is so special and this sounds like ….. just peaceful being ….. lovely

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Thank you Franz, glad you enjoyed it