All Comments on 'Hipster Comes Over Finally'

by teyteyteytey0012

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26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Doubt

Frankly, after reading this, I don't think that the Great Dane would be interested.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
That Great Dane

Would rather become a Toy Poodle, than even be written into this crap. He would run faster than a Greyhound if she even opened the door.

Impo_64Impo_64almost 5 years ago
Just one word to define this...

Just one word to define this: Bad! Even when they fuck they talk as if they are in a restaurant eating a meal...1*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Why am I not surprised?

That our resident douchenozzle 26thNC has got to make his standard dickwad comment whenever a wife gets a bit of strange dick in a story. Too bad he couldn’t keep his own wife from getting some, so now he’s on his lame as one man crusade to post negative comments on every story about that.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
This made my skin crawl

Nobody is THAT stupid.

No stars for this complete drivel.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Wonderful opening story!

Loved it, loved the revealed relationship between the "wonton" (Chinese food lover?) slut and her unseen hubby. Looking forward to more.

And oh, yeah, I'm sure you'll get flamed again and again by 26thNC, a repressed pervert who can't resist reading about slut wives and their loving hubbies but always posts a comment where he pretends to be outraged.

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Present tense or past tense

Please pick one and stick with it.

Prince020402Prince020402almost 5 years ago
Was thas a continuation of another story?

I'm confused.

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchalmost 5 years ago
What's lower on the food chain than a hipster-douche?

The kind of skank who follows up hipster-banging with

Fantasies about dog sex.

It was a passable three starvmedium tedium of a story until that sentence

WTF FOO?!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
I skimmed through some

But you had me at the very last sentence, so I re-read it all.

I really adore a slut who can cook chinese.

< subtitle. 'Voice-to-text is not for you.' >

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Thank you

a very nicely written short story...

although, I would have liked to know where hubby was :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Pretty straightforward.

I don't get it. Why is this guy a hipster? What IS a hipster? Someone with a beard who drinks PBR? He doesn't sound like a hipster to me, just some regular horny guy. R.

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