All Comments on 'His Agony, Her Pleasure'

This is definitely a story that will be nestled happily away in my mind, to be brought back out for later use. Your fantasy has become mine as well now. :)

You write very well, something that can be so hard to find. Especially in that you write from both points of view quite nicely. I love the richness of the details, the reality of it all. A superb read, one I'll have to come back to again some time.

good story... it turned me on, and thats what really counts.... I think I'll be using that one later mmmmmm

Wonderful! Such a fine balance of fear and pleasure would be fun to experience.

The "probing" of a new subbie, would he balk or jump in feet first.... how much is too much.... is a difficult thing for a Dom to ascertain on a first play date. The discovery of a partner who is really into it is a gift beyond measure.

I have had similar real adventures, so no need to apologise for feared inaccuracy. Wax won't necessarily leave burns, depending on the colour of the wax (some waxes are hotter) and the height from which you drop it, and where on the body it hits.

A great start, more please..... D^2

He's out the door and down the road, never to return. If she's lucky he doesn't hurt her or send her to jail. The hospitals and morgue are full of stupid women like her that think it's ok to treat people badly.

This was a well written story, I found the details just right for an erotic "tool". It turned me on and even made me get off. Te enhance pleasure from his perspective was well written from a new submissive's perspective as well... Very good job, hope to see more from you.

When she released him? "Now was that so bad?" Yes, it was. Your portrayal of a rape does nothing to change the fact that it was a rape. Once he calms down and she releases him I can't imagine him not doing one of two things - either dressing, leaving and going to the Police or simply beating her to a pulp. Do you really imagine, even in a fictional tale, any other possible outcome?

I really enjoyed this story. I often wonder why people read a story like this and complain. If D/S is not your thing stop reading. For me the idea is incredibly exciting. Giving up control because of your lust, having your mind scrambled with pain and pleasure, being a slave to your body's uncontrollable reaction. HOT!

I liked the details.

You propably should read throug it one more time and make some correktions. At some points your english or grammar skills seem to lack as much as mine do.

Hope you will write more storys about overpowering women.

Anonumous #1

I did indeed like it.