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She resolutely ended that line of thought as she stood up and went to bed. For now she just had to let things run their course and get as much enjoyment out of it as she could.
END PART I
- COMMENTS
Anonymous7 months agoLoved the suspense end. You know, keep ' em cumming !
Writing is a craft. You'll get better, the more that you do.
Anonymousover 2 years agoWho are the morons who think this is well written?
Who is the neighbor? Mrs Cinders, Mrs Cinder Mrs Cider or Mrs Sanders?
The past tense of orgasm is orgasmed.
There were so many missing words it was difficult to read.
She'd put on some rogue? Hillarious.
She told him to sit down beside him. How is that possible.
You really need an editor or to stop..
RiseOneover 3 years agoWhy would he need her hair to make it? It's logical enough that it required his sperm but her hair? She's gonna drink it anyway and saliva = DNA.
Sapper257about 5 years agoBit long I must admit. Good thing is you kept the story line going. All part of the learning curve. I like stories of 2 to 3 pages. Also my favourites are incest and mostly Grandson and Grandmother.
You could make the ladies older, always appeals.
Hope there is another one for me now.
Keep writing.
REgards
