All Comments on 'His Desperate Need Ch. 02'

by JSamuels

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

great so far. i can see this is going to be one hard (pun) month for both of them, what a way to suffer in denial. please keep writing on this story..

jackkeatsjackkeatsover 1 year ago

I want to BE Robert. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good premise.

But rushed.

You wrote: "Twice more she toyed him to the edge, leaving him desperate to ejaculate but helplessly unable to." Absolutely devoid of details. Sad. Need ed the details, not the Reader's Digest version.

Four stars.

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