All Comments on 'His Ultimate Fantasy Ch. 01'

Good story, but the constant jumping around between viewpoints and points in time is distracting and makes the story less enjoyable. Some change of perspective can be interesting, but it can easily be overdone. Really well-written story otherwise, though.

Nice surprise ending. I like findom.

Enjoyed it very much. Can’t wait to find out who Mistress Chen is. From experience I know Juggling the demands of multiple findoms is challenging and can be fraught with peril if One of Them thinks She is the one!

Great beginning, keep it going