All Comments on 'History with a Past'

by SyPhigh

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CupidCupidCupidCupid4 months ago

This is a really good story. Maggie's background story, her and Tiffany's discovery of BDSM and Tiffany's assault on Maggie, is all well written. What I think is missing, is a middle part to the story. I think you should have explored further, as to how Maggie ended up visiting Tiffany every fortnight for their BDSM trysts? Such as her emotions, which would have been all over the place, after what happened between her and Tiffany.

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