All Comments on 'Holiday with Grandma'

Great story. There’s Nothing like a sexy granny

I loved it! I can’t wait to see how things develop before next summer. This should be worth at least two more stories. *****

Great story. Can't wait to read about next year's vacation. I was a little disappointed, apparently liz didn't teach him the art muff diving, and after tasting his own off Liz's lips, you didn't have Barry follow through by having some creampie.

Fantastic story. Would love to hear how the next years vacation goes with mom along.

Was she the moms mom or the dads mom? I like to know these things

Mom definitely needs to join so he can start breeding them!

Definitely worthy of a sequel, maybe his grandmother's friends join them the next trip.

looking forward to part two

Fantastic !!! Loved this one.... hope there is another chapter, soon, don't think I could wait 11month!!!

A lack of knowledge of how to punctuate sentences and paragraphs, coupled with poor grammar detract significantly from what could be a darned good story. Also, folks just don't talk the overly formal way the writer concocted the dialogue. Too bad.

Wish my grandmas were so much fun!

They were both quite sexy….

That was great for me also. Now where did I leave the lube?

I know a lot of people like the quick stories, but it's too bad you didn't take your time with this one. It could've been pretty good.

GREAT TAIL (ER, UH. TALE THAT IS

GREAT TAIL (TALE) AND I LOVED IT......CINCO ESTRELLAS!