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don87654don87654almost 20 years ago
Shitty, with a capital S

Anytime one of these fantasty stories involves a condom or other birth control, it deserves a '1' or '0'! The story is/was fine, but condoms in a swinging fantasy?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Excellent Start

Ignore the above comment. All swingers wear condoms, especially in a foreign country. Keep up the good story and writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
this story is in 3rd person, pre-tense, and thereby not worth reading

sorry to say, but you keep the readers out of the story by making it in retrospective and by making it look like it's written in 3rd person..

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