All Comments on 'Holly is Amazing'

Why are the cheating whores always shy?

I loved the story, but I’m not sure why it’s in the Loving Wives category which is usually for cheating wives. This story said she “was well rid of her husband because he was a brute” so I assume he is her “Ex” and she is not cheating. So I took it as a beautifully romantIc story - “love at 1st sight”ish or first chat-ish story which I thought was beautifully done and very Hotly described. Great work by the author!!!

This is the most atrocious bit of writing I've seen on Literotica, and I've seen some bad writing. The story is fine, the dialogue is okay (but could use a bit of improvement), but the editing went completely missing. The grammar and syntax are poor, but the run-together sections, the paragraph breaks at the wrong places, etc., make it difficult and frustrating to follow -- and impossible for the author to polish. A good editing would turn it from a story that completely fails to live up to its potential into a good story that would make its author proud.