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by Sean943

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

My fantasy

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Story’s OK, but you make reading it a chore due to poor punctuation, particularly your lack of commas. Read it aloud without pausing unless there’s a stop or comma and see how long you last without breathing.

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Career; apprentice engineer to Company Director. I have had a number of blog stories published on the web and on this site, short stories which have been based on real life events. Some of my stories are provocative and erotic. Each story has a message about how we see ou...