by tony090909
Well enuf executed, but WTF on the mystery ending. There really can't be any spicing up a game where you end up fucking another's spouse. This didn't even have a chapter no. on it. Can't score it high at all.
Sweet tale
Something different, cleverly done. Early computer software for the hardware.
Enjoyable read. Very erotic. Pity is wasn't longer though, more time spent building up sexual tension, I'd have been happy to have spent more time visualising the scene and reading how they all hesitated before going all the way. Just a personal opinion, I've given the story a good score.
Having lived in that era, condoms were available!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why run the risk of an unwanted pregnancy!!!!!?????!!!!! Let each hubby raise another's bastard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeah, great fun was had by all!!!!!!!!!!
Well done! Our first swap involved only one couple and lasted all night, as we slept with our new lovers until breakfast. Like your experience, it was a bit shameful but highly erotic. We continued the relationship for two years, and it was wonderful. Haven't swapped since, only because we haven't found the right couple.
Wish more wives would be like the ones in your story. That would spice many couples lives up.
I've liked maybe 4 out of 48 stories of yours (a couple I marked as favorites). This I gave a 4.
I've never "Followed You" because 4 out of 48 is rather poor. The stories of yours I really like... Well, I wish there were more like then. But you've got to be true to yourself; and I respect that.
Did not care for this story. I think I am drawn to things that are (to me) at least a little plausible. This is was not one of them. Thanks for your submissions.
What a great story, it could almost be real.
Loved how you just put it together with normal people and wrote it just as it might happen