by writerannabelle
I still absolutely love this series but I don't think I can get past the stuff Yuki has done. Mike might forgive her but I can't.
I am so invested in this story, you have me checking everyday waiting till the next chapter hits. keep em coming
Beeeeth!, damn you Oliver. I hope Mike can bring her back, she was one of the cool ones..
This story will never have a satisfying ending until she is rescued. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Will we maybe find out that Mike’s dagger is the Vorpal blade? Snicker-snack 🤔
Wow your writing and storytelling has only gotten better and better. This chapter just makes me want more! Keep it up. I am a big fan.
I seriously have to say that if Yuki's eyes are not opened for the betterment after what Beth just did. I will seriously be pissed off. She knows more people are on their way and yet I still don't see her willing to let Mike back in. Now Mike and the others are all going to have to fight Yuki's creation "the jabberwock." But I will say that I hope that Tinks specialized goggles will be able to help them in the armory. You know it's just like you can see magical things and everything with thoes bad boys.
Oh my, I was beginning to have withdrawal symptoms. Love your work.
Good intentions, Totally wrong methods.
Hopefully she learned a thing or two from Beth.
On the other hand, Cant wait to see where this is going.
Yuki is a stone cold fox. Only took a few chapters for me to see it. Keep going, the quality hasn't faded. Nicely done.
This was so good that I didn't even realize that there wasn't a sex scene until I read your afterword mentioning a threesome in the next chapter. Please keep up the amazing work!
Another great installment, looking forward to many many more.
I hope the difference between wha Beth said and what Oliver agreed to was just a mistake and not something the demon meant to do. If done purposefully.... Oh shit.
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I wonder if the rats can dig to her location? If they can go to an isolated pocket dimension, then surely, given enough information, they can travel to Oliver's mirror dimension right? Though actually beating him is a totally different problem.
U finally updated thank God, it was worth the wait , poor Beth tho, fuck you Yuki, I hope Mike gets home soon and slaps some sense into that bitch, I love how u keep it so interesting and intense like the mysteries keep coming and they get better and better, think mike will get both back by killing OLIVER the demon with the knife
WOW! I don't normally read in this category however, I started reading this story two days ago and I haven't been able to put it down since (all 37Ch). Your work is all inspiring and this saga rates among the best I have read on this site (5* to date). Therefore I would like to take this opportunity to thank you for sharing your fantastic world with us, and that I am now officially a big Annabelle HFHM Fan!!
Looking forward to your next instalment, thanks again;)
A threesome in the NEXT chapter? (Please be MFF) This book needs MORE of those! And MORE! Mike’s got a bunch of lovers and he’s done nothing with it!? It boggles logic!
One doggy, the other missionary. Another getting fingered. God gave us 2 hands and a tongue. Use them!
Seriously though. Threesome’s (and more) are not that out there (compared to monster humping?). When I’m with 2 girls they rarely do things to each other. It’s important I control the pace, because it’s important they stay focused on me ESPECIALLY if they’re related. Otherwise, even if you get them in bed; They’ll get weirded out and leave. Friends are easier. And you can last longer cause you have to switch a lot. A popular position is one is (reverse) cowgirl, while you tongue the other. If there’s a 3rd girl I have to use my fingers on her. Start out on top and when they’re thoroughly aroused you can switch to the bottom and let them do most of the work.
Mike hasn't had a lot of sexy times in the last few episodes so I assume next time he's gonna bonk the Jabberwocky. Snickersnack.
I realize you are very busy on this series , but would you Please consider doing more on the Iceman story ? I just finished reading it yet again . Somehow I got to vote again so you got 5's across the board again . This is my favorite in the Mature genre ! Please , I beg you !
Very well written but can we have mike to go back to exploring the house after the yuki arc is done.To me there is so much potential to this story with the house and its mysteries instead of the villain of the week.Iam guessing Mike and his people come back and make peace with yuki just as the warlocks and witches finally attack and they team up to take them out then a little peace and Emily finially shows up for the grand finale. JJ
Once again you've scored a 11 out of 10. I'm so loving this story. Your characters and plot are rich in thought and imagination. Keep it up can't wait for more.
“One! Two! Through and through, the vorpal blade went snickersnack.”
Funny, Mike seems to have a vorpal blade with him.
Wow,.. until next time, keep your friends close and your monsters girls closer.
"Being a victim is a state of being, not an identity. You can be the victim of a crime, but it only defines you if you let it. Try again."
This was amazing. Thank you.
All this drama we've experienced has only been on the timeframe of one month? My goodness. These characters deserve a break
I, and many of your other fans, are anxiously awaiting chapter 39. I know you are busy, with a life to live and all, but you have made me fall in love with this story. So I hope and pray that the next chapter will come soon. Thanks for a great story.
One thing I hate, is when you read a series and come to the "known end" with out actually ending. Then becoming impatient waiting for the rest of the series to come out. Especially when you love the series.
Tap, tap, tap...
Looking at the clock
Loved every bit can't wait for the rest. Read it from beginning to end, erm current end.in about a week. Cant put down
I have to say this is one of, if not the best, continuing series I've come across on Lit. One of the things I feel that makes it so is your consisancy of keeping track of the history you've created. Very few authors on here do it well and you are a master. You have so many story arcs going on here it would be easy to lose track, yet you've been spot on. It's amazing and just keeps the flow of the story so smooth for me.
Now that I'm caught up I'm just as anxious for the next chapter as everyone else, but take your time as you've got a lot going on here, nevermind in the real. With your consistancy I know the wait will be worth it. Thank you so very much for giving us a peek into your world, absolutely love it!
ever since chapter 5 the rest of chapters went to hell,, I really hate the confusions..
Writer cannot even give a good detail, always ventured off the subject..
I am not reading the rest.. instead I voted the rest the lowest rating.. Sorry, the entire story sucked...
This one really moved the story forward, very good pace, well written and the characters stayed true to themselves.
The story is simply fantastic. The sex is literally just icing on the cake. I haven't read a story this good in a long time. I couldn't stop myself from commenting! Well done!
Excellent writing, consistent and varied characterisations, love it. The naughty bits are a bit rarer and briefer than I'd like, though.
Keep up the amazing work, you're a fantastic story-teller!
Oh my. Another gripping one. I SO wanted Yuki to save Beth by turning Oliver to Stone and deprive the coven of his power. But maybe that was a little too obvious.
We shall see.
At this point the sex is just a cherry ontop. This story has me really caring about the characters and invested deeply. It is like watching your favorite show and shipping the characters but they ACTUALLY fuck! I am turning into a big fan of your work.
I’m exhausted. Too much for a mere mortal to fathom. Why didn’t Tink bite Mike upon their reunion? Sometimes, there’s nothing like a good bite to get your attention. Fun read! Finn
Lady, you rock! Fantastic descriptions, characters, story lines, and ideas. Sometimes it's hard to keep up, whether it's an action scene, a fight scene, or a sex scenery. Great stuff. Keep it coming. I intend to abandon this story at chapter 274,708.
bloody brilliant....this part i can barely put down....
really wish i had a Tink
This story is like riding on a roller coaster! Lots of twists and turns! I definitely like it and hope you'll keep writing! I've said it before and I'll say it again, YOU ROCK!!!
Absolutely riveting. :( sad about Beth but I’m hoping this helps Yuki started helping the house more.
It’s interesting that despite Yuki being her wife, the house chose Mike. Maybe because it doesn’t travel along family lines. Maybe cause she was trapped elsewhere and it couldn’t reach her. Would be cool to find out the rules for this down the line.
I hope the story gets better but the last 5 or so chapters have been really disappointing.
Holy shit. Beth's moment over the pool was fucking amazing. This was some Attack on Titan level writing.
"Reading a fairy's mind is like trying to read a newspaper using a strobe light." See? Now you've got me wanting to try that just to see how hard it actually is. (The newspaper thing, not the fairy thing."
I really dig the bigger role the rats are playing, and Reggie in particular. Awesome chapter! I'm wondering if the hater posts are from people who are just looking for the literary equivalent of a bad porn video?
That.Was.Epic!
Love the turnarounds in expectations and story direction, especially where, even if she hadn't already done so multiple times before, Beth makes herself invaluable to the growing family.
Dear Annabelle,
It's the fourth time I have started to read this series and I can still say; I love it. A great balance between eroticism and great fantasy. Wonderful written in a clear and proper language with nuance for the necessary details. Constant in use of character specific tone of language. Thank you.
Cheers,
Marc
You're teasing us ratcheting up the drama and tension with every instalment. How are they going to rescue Beth, unless they have to beat the Society first?
Cant stop reading. Very exiting. Better than a lot of „normal“ fantasy books. The Sexstuff is only a bonus on top
It's official--Beth is a genius. Not only is she able to think on her feet, but her heart-to-heart with Yuki? Pure gold. I need her to come back ASAP and I NEED something bad to happen to Oliver. REALLY SOON, please.
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE that I have 60 chapters to read before I have to start stalking Annabelle for the next one!
GREAT chapter.
I wouldn’t be shocked if the house’s rules are a bit more complicated than Yuki knows. There have been interactions in flashbacks that seem to indicate that Yuki was tolerated by most of the others, but truly only friends with Naia and Daisy.
Beth rocks and may become part of the most taboo of all sex in this series: human on human sex.
Best one yet. IMO! Never thought I would be interested in this genre. You definitely have a gift in writing this. This should be made into an animated series. Thank you for sharing your gift.
That was an interesting plot point. I'm glad that Beth told off Yuki. Maybe she'll learn.